If you are going to copy off of In Flames at least mimic Whoracle and not Soundtrack To Your Escape.  That said there's an entire metal style that does that, the whole melodeath/folk metal stuff like Ensiferum, Wintersun etc. At any rate, this song is good
Imagine if Shellback wrote metal riffs still, instead of Moves Like Jagger. Metal is a labor of love, though, since people usually don't get the recognition they deserve for it, since it isn't as "accessible" to most people.